The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this whimsical poem, at least it initially looked whimsical, but even though it has fun lines, it has a deep depth to as well. I could definitely relate and think you did a great job.
08/08/16
I don't comment on poems very often, but I enjoyed this one. I got your message loud and clear. Well done.