The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/16
Lovely story. I wanted to know more, but darn those word limits.
06/04/16
I agree, you caught my attention, well done.
This is a great story. You did a wonderful job of developing the characters and painting a vivid picture. My red ink is tiny. Remember when using words like Mom as a name (proper noun) , it starts with a capital: I love you, Mom. I love my mom. I think your take on the topic was fresh, and your message left a lump in my throat. This is one of my favorites this week.
06/09/16
Congrats on your Highly Commendable rating. I really liked your article. It flowed so well- such an easy read.