The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/16
Very creative. Just one thing confused me. The screech at the end. I first thought that it was Melody arriving and seeing the rocker, but then you sat down so I was unsure. Guess I'm getting slow in my old age.
This is really sweet. You do a wonderful job of painting a picture. I can almost smell the varnish. You picked some great verbs to make your story pop. I enjoyed the subtle humor and sentiments. Nicely done.
06/10/16
Congratulations, Sherry, on placing 2nd place in the Intermediate category.

It took me a while to figure out it was a rocker, but I enjoyed guessing. This was a tender and endearing piece.