The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/16
What a great story! I love how you described the dog and how you came to own her. Red-ink: review your punctuation before submitting, especially semi-colons. Focus more attention on how the dog sneaked into your hearts...how did she do this? Give some examples.
A very heart-warming piece.
You stirred a memory of my favorite childhood pal, Booger. Thanks for sharing yours.
05/25/16
Dogs have been shown to be beneficial to our health. My dog died a couple years ago, and I still miss him.
05/26/16
Thanks for this engaging story!

BLessings~
05/26/16
Congrats! Heart warming story.
05/26/16
Congratulations, Kathleen, on placing 3rd place in the Intermediate category. That story tugged at my heart.