The Official Writing Challenge
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05/06/16
Cute story.
Maybe written as you walked down "Memory Lane"?

Several lessons could be learned from this story. 1. There is always one who is a leader and others follow.
2. The leader is respected and honored.
3. Desires or need brings forth the leaders as well as the followers.
4. Asking is always appropriate, especially when done in respect.
5. Kindness wears many coats.
6. Joy can be shared by both the givers and the receivers.

I liked your story. I could see them at the window talking.
05/10/16
I loved your title and your story! Well done!

Blessings~
05/11/16
I felt I was right there watching the boys and the shopkeeper. Authentic dialog. I enjoyed reading this story. It brought back happy memories.
05/12/16
Very nice story. Flowed very well.

Definitely, left me wanting a licorice stick.
05/12/16
Congratulations, Raymond, for placing 2nd place in the Intermediate category. This was a delightful story, and I don't think you'll be in this division long.
Thank you, everyone, for your kind and helpful comments.
05/15/16
Congratulations on 2nd Place!
05/17/16
Congratulations on Second Place!!