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Sugars and other sweeteners are spoken of but in an unconnected way. I could not see a definite theme - just jumping here and there.

Sugar and honey seemed to be synonyms.

Suggested themes for a poem on this topic: things that contain sugar, benefits of sugar, harmful effects of sugar, names of endearment that contain the word "sugar", and ...

Keep writing in poetic form if that is what you are drawn to. I feel it is somewhat more difficult to master than prose.
The first part made me smile thinking of "cotton candy" that I enjoyed so much as a child

The rest of your piece reminded me of "proverbs" a lot of wisdom and insight.

Good job,

I liked your subtle humor sprinkled in throughout the poem.

Congratulations. Dorothy. on placing Highly commendable in your division.
Congratulations on Level 2 Highly Commended.