The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh the joys of kids and pets: we kept mice too and I know the pitfalls of mice re-production only too well! Told with great humour. God bless.
I want to know, "What did happen to Max?" Nice story, I enjoyed the dialect, especially, btw husband and wife.
01/10/06
"A real page turner", as they say in the Book-business. I kept thinking perhaps Mini had been unfaithful - but for Max to be a Dead Beat Dad...hmmmm? very funny and well written.
Hehehe, the "Don't take it so seriously--It's just a mouse." line was classic. I did get a little confused on the time-line though... Was there two litters born during the story?
cruising old challenges. Happened on this one. Cute.