The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/16
Wonderful story!

Blessings~
03/05/16
Creative take on this week's topic. This was a very inspirational story.
03/07/16
A stressed mum, wondering if she's done something wrong...I'll bet a few of us identify with THAT! 😉
Good layout, easy to read, realistic wording of conversations. The problem was perhaps a bit too easily solved; I felt prepared to "work it through" but it was all over in a sentence or two. Life sometimes happens that way I guess...
Nice writing.
03/08/16
It was a good start, but I agree with another comment that it all ended too easily, too soon.