The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/16
Nicely done in content and delivery!

Blessings~
03/05/16
Excellent ending line. Dreams can sometimes prompt us to action.


You need to spell out numbers ten and under, or use A.M. or P.M. after times.
03/08/16
I liked the suspense in the beginning. About halfway through I knew what was coming, but I still enjoyed it. There were some great descriptions too.
03/10/16
Congratulations, Hugh, on placing 1st place in the Intermediate category. Your suspenseful start really drew me into your story.
03/13/16
Congratulations!!! It's a challenge to wrap up the whole story in these few words, isn't it?

I loved the words- 'The reply came from wherever peace is found'.
04/03/16
You wrote, "you must be finished before you start."

A perfect ending to a creatively written testimony piece.