The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/16
Wonderful story and message!

Blessings~
03/05/16
Good interaction between Gram and the MC. It is sometimes hard to believe that someone we look up to can have such problems as a teenager.



Your should be You're (You are).
03/08/16
Well done. Believable conversation.
03/10/16
Congratulations, Sherry, on your highly commended entry in the Intermediate category. Your writing has such an authenticity to it; I can't wait to see your name in the
Advanced category.
03/13/16
Congratulations on your highly commended!

I liked the interaction between Millie and her Grammy. It's a great message.