The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/16
Excellent work!

Blessings~
03/05/16
This poem had good rhythm and flow. Being a middle child, I can understand just how hard it is to be in the in between stage.
Wow this is so powerful. The agony and despair in the MC's voice is palpable. I feel like I could've written this on my bad days (if I could write poetry). I want to reach through the screen and hug the MC. I like the twist on the first day of the rest of your life mantra. This feels real and authentic.