The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/16
Great thoughts and wonderful truths in this piece.

Well done.

Blessings~
03/05/16
I hope you are able to get a group of poems together for publishing. It does seem like life is full of starts and stops.
03/08/16
red ink: there ARE a number of references and Jesus was used as a possessive but not spelled that way.
You hit on a subject that most of us face. I also thought you used the word "start" far too many times.
03/08/16
A personal narrative can be a powerful story. Somehow, though, this article doesn't come across as a story at all. Your message, though, is powerful and comes through loud and clear.