The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/16
Your title drew me in, and I liked how you told your poem (story) through the bullfrog's P.O.V.
02/19/16
HOPE seems a very apt application of the word "indefatigable" to me. It's possible to be TIRELESS though TIRED - incongruous as it may sound...as you clearly felt through this poem. Thanks for describing the agony.
I'm not a student of poetry, but I felt it would've been good to have the rhyme sequence contained within each stanza, as I lost the rhythm at the first couple of readings. It is possibly just a layout problem - ie my eye expects the groupings to provide me with a hint as to the rhythm. I hope this makes sense.
I'm joining you at this level next entry, so we'll meet again! 🙂