The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/16
Engaging. Good use of dialog and narrative. And I like the references to Hawai'i.
02/14/16
I just learned a new word, and enjoyed this delicious story at the same time.
02/17/16
Great job!
Blessings~
This made me nostalgic for Hawaii and its gentle easy-going people. Nice use of dialogue and descriptors.