The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/16
Very creative take on the topic. I liked your analogies.
02/17/16
Great job!

Blessings~
I love the voice! I love free verse - this would be amazing recited - I can hear the rhythm and feel the stresses. Brilliant.
A couple of splotches of red ink:
The first YOUR - should it be YOU'RE?
Emanates - spelling :)