The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/16
Good story!

I enjoyed this, great ending!

God bless~
02/07/16
I liked the folksiness of the MC, but I think there was too many words in dialect.

Good ending.

02/09/16
You really put a lot of work into making sure the dialet was consistent throughout the story, and the personality of the old man came through very well. As a person who doesn't read a lot of stories in dialect, I struggled a bit with it.