The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/16
Love the title!

Great job with the topic...well done.

God bless~
01/31/16
I loved the title and how it fit into the story. The characters were very believable. Actually, Pineapple is not such a bad name.

I found one sentence that needed to be reworked. It was the one about the licking dog. At first, I thought it needed the word were, but then I saw exactly what you meant.
02/04/16
You crafted a fun story. Very descriptive. I enjoyed it.
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