The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/16
Oh my heart really ached with this one...

Well done, and certainly on topic.

God bless~
01/30/16
You, dear author, were his family and that is all that mattered to him. Well written.
02/03/16
Beautifully written. Well involved MC. Touching story. I don't know if this is a work of fiction or a true story. Either way, it felt genuine. Nice job.
02/04/16
It is so sad when someone at a nursing home has no visitors. At the age of 96, maybe most of his friends or family had already died. I'm glad the MC touched him in a special way, and I really wanted to know what the note said.

Very well written.