The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/16
I liked how you used a well known story to make your point.

Keep writing!
01/16/16
Wonderful message!

God bless~
01/20/16
A great reminder on staying focused.

I don't know if the hare was so much a scatterbrained but I definitely see the hare as arrogant and prideful, which made him careless.

I loved the last line, "keep distractions from becoming attractions." Words of wisdom.
01/20/16
This caught my attention immediately. It was entertaining and you used wordplay well to illustrate your point. Love it.