The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved the subtle themes here. Ends very gently but on an important point. Great job, keep up the good work!
I think winning only has meaning when we have to earn it.

I'm glad God is always waiting for us to come to Him.

Keep writing!
Wow...powerful and priceless endling.

Great job.

God bless~
I enjoyed the way you built the story to an unexpected ending. Very enjoyable and meaningful.
Congratulations on your 4th place finish in the Intermediate Category, Ken.

Keep writing. You have a lot of talent.