The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/15
I love your segue into a powerful close.

Well done...

God bless~
12/11/15
Such a cute story. I thoroughly enjoyed it and can see it as a Sunday school lesson.

God Bless.
12/11/15
Your story speaks of the childlike faith that we are to have. It has a lesson for adults as well as children.

Nice Job!
This is an adaptable story. It could be used in a Children's Church curriculum. I liked the questions at the end of the lesson. There is information about steam that anyone can learn from. Great job
12/13/15
A lovely way to express the challenges of life - leading to a greater goal. Thanks!
12/14/15
Very creative story. Good take on the topic and wonderful message.
Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 12th overall. Happy Dance.