The Official Writing Challenge
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11/26/15
Thank you for this honest and well written entry. Well done! And, you nailed the topic right completely and then some!

God bless~
This is delightful. You grabbed me right at the end of the first paragraph. You did a nice job of showing the conflict. I found myself smiling and nodding my head as I read. A couple of tiny notes: crossword is one word and don't start a sentence with a numeral, spell it out or restructure the sentence. Speaking of one across, that was a great last line. I seriously laughed out loud.
M.C., Congratulations on your second place finish in the Intermediate Division. This was an honest portrayal of what can happen if you listen to the wrong influences. I got to say that rap music can grate on your nerves.
I forgot to mention that I loved the ending. 3 across for me is forgetful.
Congratulations, M. C. I enjoyed this personal story/essay, and can identify with it as I love harmony so much. Your ending was superb!