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11/20/15
Love the honesty and the growth in confidence that comes through loud and strong; and the chocolate milk analogy sounds like a good picture.
11/22/15
I enjoyed reading your story, and how well it spoke to me! Especially when you said, "I recall his living presence swirling within me reminding me of how richly blessed I am." As Thanksgiving approaches, what a reminder of blessings from the past and present we have. Thank you! Great job.
11/22/15
I like the way you equate the chocolate milk recipe to the spiritual formula. I found the whole article interesting and thought provoking. Well done!
I liked the approach you used of comparing a refreshing glass of chocolate milk and how it can't to the Holy Spirit swirling in the soul. Well thought out.
11/23/15
Your entry is so well written and informative. Your experience is a blessing to read about.I have had similar experiences and realized the heat within me had actually taken a painful condition away.

I think you hit the topic on the head and I expect this will do well with the judges.

Thanks for sharing.
11/24/15
The charm of this article is in its plain and straightforward approach. Not to mention the delicious comparison with chocolate milk:)
11/24/15
I love chocolate milk and I love this story. So honest, open and fresh. Well done.