The Official Writing Challenge
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Love the honesty and the growth in confidence that comes through loud and strong; and the chocolate milk analogy sounds like a good picture.
I enjoyed reading your story, and how well it spoke to me! Especially when you said, "I recall his living presence swirling within me reminding me of how richly blessed I am." As Thanksgiving approaches, what a reminder of blessings from the past and present we have. Thank you! Great job.
I like the way you equate the chocolate milk recipe to the spiritual formula. I found the whole article interesting and thought provoking. Well done!
I liked the approach you used of comparing a refreshing glass of chocolate milk and how it can't to the Holy Spirit swirling in the soul. Well thought out.
Your entry is so well written and informative. Your experience is a blessing to read about.I have had similar experiences and realized the heat within me had actually taken a painful condition away.

I think you hit the topic on the head and I expect this will do well with the judges.

Thanks for sharing.
The charm of this article is in its plain and straightforward approach. Not to mention the delicious comparison with chocolate milk:)
I love chocolate milk and I love this story. So honest, open and fresh. Well done.