The Official Writing Challenge
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Endearing story of a grandma and her granddaughter and the bond they formed by talking together.
11/23/15
Well written and interesting. The wisdom of those older than us is more valuable than we realize.

Thanks for sharing.
11/24/15
I really liked the way the theme of stir was brought into this story ie. Katie stirring the stew while Grandma stirred Katie's heart. Well done.
The connection between the two showed as well as the wisdom of "Grandma".

This would be a nice opening to "the rest of the story". Could you make it into a Teen Book about growing up?
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