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Fun yet profound!
This was certainly a creative take on a biblical passage and an enjoyable read with a very good lesson.
I like your creative twist on this Bible story. It's well written, too. The ending seemed a little rushed compared to the pacing of the rest. And a minor formatting note - putting the Scripture reference in an end note will prevent a break in the flow. Great job with this topic - it was a difficult one. :)
well written. I loved the pace too.

The Power boats took me away from the time period though. I wish you would have concocted a special sail or paddle boat for the time. Other than that, the message was right on.

Very creative!
I really enjoyed this. Very creative and well done.