The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/15
A cute poem and I really enjoyed the ending. Keep up the good work.

God bless. :)
11/03/15
I can relate to your poem, sometimes making a mess of my writing. I have learned a lot here on FaithWriters though.
I don't write much poetry but I like to read the rhyming poetry best. Rhyming all 4 lines in each stanza must be hard. Good job.
One suggestion I have for the 1st line in the last stanza - So, God can do all my mixing and fixing. I think leaving out some of the words helps the rhythm and still gives the impression of 'from now on'. But I am not well learned in poetry so not sure. Blessings, LaVonne