The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/15
A nice message about love.

Critique: Perhaps you might put spaces in between your paragraphs. It makes it much easier to read that way.

God Bless. :)
11/03/15
I find it interesting that you put longsuffering at the top of the list. You made a good point, that if your love is not longsuffering then it isn't really love. Great message in few words. Blessings, LaVonne