The Official Writing Challenge
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10/22/15
I enjoyed your story. The plight of teachers is so real, and you conveyed it perfectly. The totally unexpected ending had me laughing. I did not see the truth coming. Great job. This is a winner.
10/23/15
Send a copy of this to O'Riley on FOX. This is absolutely delightful. That was even better than the test answer to the question about ground and surface water, "Ground water is the water on the bottom of water. Surface water is the water on the top of water." I hope you collect and save these things. I'm going to lol over this all day. Make a book, "Things History Never Said"
10/24/15
Cute story. I could only imagine the dilemma the teacher was going through. I give props to the student- very creative.

Critique: Instead of putting two spaces in between paragraphs, you might want to put one.

God bless. :)
Very cute entry when you read the whole thing.

But what can retired teachers do for the students of today?
(Is this next month's topic?)
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 15 overall!Happy Dance!
10/31/15
Congratulations on 1st place.