The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/15
What a beautiful message. Great job.

God bless you. :)
10/17/15
Sometimes our life has to flash before our eyes before we see its true meaning.

12/03/15
12/03/15
Hi Rebecca,
I liked your poem.
Couple of comments:
Is bible capitalized?
The following clause does not have the same rhythm as the rest of the poem.

"Of Father Son Spirit, the ultimate crew
Whose love will ever and ever like glue"

Would you consider making it more metaphorical? This is just a sample for you to understand what I'm trying to communicate, "Whose love is intertwined forever like glue."

God bless you and keep writing!