The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/15
This is a great inspiration for those who have loved ones who are not Christian. Good job.

Critique: Separate dialogue with a space as you would a new paragraph. It makes the story easier to read and more inviting.

God bless you. :)
10/18/15
That is why it is so important to keep praying for a non-believer. I remember a woman from church who prayed for thirty years before this family member became a Christian.