The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/15
I have heard that some people remember seeing themselves from a far during a near death experience. I am glad this family experienced seeing two of their children turn to the Lord.
10/18/15
Well-done. I was getting stressed out, worrying about whether or not he'd make it.
The article does not follow the title (Back in the Fold) of the article.

The boy's own thoughts and words about the church and the priest shows that he was not in the fold.

Dreaming he was looking at the cross and then asking to please let him tell them he loved them, was only a dream.

Our relationship with Jesus begins when we believe that he is both Lord and Christ (Acts 2) It is then that our faith can act upon or obey commands because of what we believe.

You wrote an imaginative story with an imaginative setting which is what I think you set out to do. You did it well.
You really had me involved, I wanted to know what would happen, what was happening, where had he been all this time? I wanted questions answered - a sign of good writing. Well done.