The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
09/10/15
You've captured a range of contrasting emotions and memories, and you've expressed them with very descriptive credibility.
I can see this as a setting for a much larger story, to check out other crimes scenes; their perpetrators, their victims and their solutions. Good work.
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 11 overall! Happy Dance!