The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/15
Your story was on topic and provided a clear message of which I enjoyed.

God bless~
09/05/15
That was entertaining. I liked your humor and your sighs, groans and looks. I;ve been told I have the look as well.
09/06/15
I loved your honesty in this story mixed with humor, sadness and frustration.
09/07/15
Disney, the place of magic, was also a place where your MC faced reality head on. Descriptive action scenes made this an interesting story. Keep writing.