The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/15
If only us Christians showed the same devotion and passion as the people who bow to a false idol.
08/16/15
Wow. This is really interesting. I had no idea about this.

This works well how you have it, but you might want to consider re-working this a bit. Give us a personal account of someone who made the journey, only to the the TRUE faith in the end. Same message, but a different approach that would draw a different audience. The account may be fictional, but you could mention that it's based on fact. Just something to consider.

Great job with this.
08/23/15
I really enjoyed this story Pat, thank you. How amazing that God's grace requires non of this self effort.