The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/15
I really liked your choice of title. I'm glad we're just passing through.
08/17/15
I, too am glad we are "just passing through."

Generally speaking, dictionary definitions are not a good "hook" to get people really into your piece. You might want to consider starting with a story or illustration of some sort.

There are some great reminders here.