The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/15
Great job with the topic! Well done and great approach to bring the topic to life.

God bless~
08/07/15
Great story, thank you! A very different way to approach a family vacation, I enjoyed the twist. One tiny typo noted in a sentence that had the word 'year' repeated twice. Otherwise, a well written piece of work.
08/11/15
Good story. Warm and touching,