The Official Writing Challenge
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07/10/15
I loved this! Fantastic job with the topic!

God bless~
07/10/15
I enjoyed the use of dialogue to tell the story! I did get a little lost sometimes regarding who was speaking. Great lesson!

Some critiques regarding the writing:
-Consider rewording the third paragraph (It takes more than swerving to miss a deer and to drive off a mountain road...)
- Find other words for 'said'