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07/10/15
Great story! Loved this...and loved loved the ending!!

God bless~
07/11/15
Great story! It seems Ted is more in tune with God than Sharon.
07/12/15
Cute story with a message thrown in. Loved the last line.
07/12/15
the last line was cute! What a pleasant, straight forward story:) Good job
07/15/15
Uuuugh! We've had those God-less trips! Nothing good gained but a lot of energy expended. Thank you for the reminder because there are many ways each day we can potentially leave God out. The last line was funny. Thankfully, for our sake, it's not true! :)
You have told a very telling story. This happens too often, and you described it wonderfully.

I use Word Counter to help me with spellings of usual and oft-times unusual words - it is a terrific help!

Looking very much forward to more of your "telling" tales!
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