The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the play on words and numbers and the way you repeated that theme throughout. It's a coming-of-age and road trip story all in one. Very well done! I enjoyed it a lot.
Loved this! Creative and fresh out of the box!

God bless~
Intriguing title and opening!
I love the voice and inclusion of numbers. Great job tying it together at the end. I very much enjoyed this story!

Typo: (The three of sat on the front bench seat)
Thank you for the encouraging comments.

Jenny ... thank you for pointing out the typo.
This was so fun to read! Your misadventures made me laugh, especially the fish story. That happened to me one time - and I ate it too. Brave girls rule! :) Love the last line; great ending.
Loved this road trip. You took what would be an average story and made it fun, creative and a great read.
Congratulations Jenn! I knew this would do well. Wonderful!