The Official Writing Challenge
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07/09/15
I love the play on words and numbers and the way you repeated that theme throughout. It's a coming-of-age and road trip story all in one. Very well done! I enjoyed it a lot.
07/10/15
Loved this! Creative and fresh out of the box!

God bless~
07/10/15
Intriguing title and opening!
I love the voice and inclusion of numbers. Great job tying it together at the end. I very much enjoyed this story!

Typo: (The three of sat on the front bench seat)
07/11/15
Thank you for the encouraging comments.

Jenny ... thank you for pointing out the typo.
07/12/15
This was so fun to read! Your misadventures made me laugh, especially the fish story. That happened to me one time - and I ate it too. Brave girls rule! :) Love the last line; great ending.
07/15/15
Loved this road trip. You took what would be an average story and made it fun, creative and a great read.
07/16/15
Congratulations Jenn! I knew this would do well. Wonderful!