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This was an insightful story about how someone may feel when he or she is depressed. Wbile medicine may help with the symptoms of depression, there may be underlying causes that go untreated if help is not sought. I like the opening Bible verse that you used about sparrows. THere may have been a few sentences that changed from present to past tense but overall excellent job.


06/03/15
Oh... this story saddened me because I know there are many people trapped in a world such as this. But it was also a happy story because it showed the hope of God can reach the darkest places. I pray this is fictional, if not, I pray for you.
Congratulations on your 5th place story in the intermediate level.