The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/15
He never leaves us nor forsakes us... Sometimes we don't wait or stick around long enough to see His presence. Sometimes we don't ask or listen, or expect an answer when He is willing to give one, and so we miss it. Your story has so many good examples in a short piece of waiting, asking, listening and finally, seeing He never left. Thank you.
06/03/15
What an interesting story! I assume it a true one. A little dialogue interspersed throughout would help it.
Keep writing.
06/04/15
Waiting is never easy, and neither is lots of change and stress.

Congratulations on your 3rd place award in the Intermediate category.