The Official Writing Challenge
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05/07/15
So peaceful and beautiful.Loved this.

God bless~
It's wonderful to see God in things like the seashore or a starry night. It's so wonderful to commune with him there. I'm not a poetry expert by any means, but I did stumble over some lines. Perhaps ask someone to read it aloud, and if they stumble, the chances are that it might need smoothing out some. Your passion comes through in your poem. I love the picture you painted about the vanishing sins. I've never heard it portrayed in quite that way before, and it's absolutely brilliant. I look forward to reading more of your work.