The Official Writing Challenge
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05/07/15
Wow - that was powerfully moving and profoundly stirring on a spiritual level. Thank you for sharing this piece with us. I'm sure it'll bless many hearts.

God bless~
You do an excellent job of setting up the conflict right off, pulling the reader into the story. I'm sure this wasn't easy to write. I also liked how you showed a different way we all pray from time to time--a conversation with God tinged with anger and fear. He has big shoulders and can handle it and deliver us from it.
05/08/15
A message that touches the heart even when we have not personally experienced abuse
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 14 overall. Happy Dance!