The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/15
Excellent job with the topic. Well done.

God bless~
04/19/15
Your step by step account of Christ's ordeal makes His sacrifice more real. I've heard the story on numerous occasions, yet the raw appreciation I felt through your words make it feel like I'm reading it for the first time.

I like your use of single sentence paragraphs. It makes your points more profound. Keep writing.
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