The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 382 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
04/17/15
Wow- Powerfully delivered! Great story. Children are often the ones who can bring adults to their knees.

Great job with this!!

God bless~
04/17/15
Oh my!!! Left me deeply moved! Kept me totally enthralled the entire length of the article. Couldn't read fast enough to see what was coming next. I wish you were allowed a larger word count so you could tell more of the parents reaction or response with their embrace.

WOW.... WOW

I'll keep my eye out for your work on Faithwriters and beyond this. God's gifting is evident in your writing!

Live blessed!
This was a powerfully moving piece. The vivid imagery of the characters was spellbinding. "A child should lead them" is a term that comes to mind. I felt that i was in the room listening to every word said.