The Official Writing Challenge
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03/12/15
Wow- somber read with a light of hope shining in the end. The tone of authenticity alarmed me, but the message was clearly uplifting in its content.

God bless~
This is something so totally unexpected from you...but so totally true!

Excellent job. It certainly should make people ponder!

God Bless :)
03/15/15
Great story and great finish. Thanks for entering the Challenge, I hope you do well.
03/16/15
I always love happy endings!!! I pray this for all people everywhere! Smiling! Thank you!
The Bible only gives a few glimpses of what the judgment scene may look like for us. We just have to be ready and as it says, faithful till our end.

It is interesting that you have the angel with tears when it says there will be no tears in heaven.

You use descriptions well and have an interesting plot.
03/17/15
A dark story with a wonderful ending! Great job!