The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/15
This was so powerful and inspirational...well done.

God bless~
03/09/15
It is true, we are all "in need" and He is the one that can supply. So often, we don't recognize either, and go on in the state of bewilderment because of the circumstances going on around us. All unnecessary. Your thoughts give the reader much to think about. Thank you!
This is quite lovely. It flows nicely and is a beautiful message. I know punctuation can be a stylistic choice in poetry, but the lines missing periods or with a capital letter distracted me slightly. You may want to consider traditional punctuation to make it easier for the reader to u destiny. That could just be me though. I'll admit poetry isn't my strongest genre. I do think you nailed the topic. You left me with a warm feeling at the end too. Nice job.
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