The Official Writing Challenge
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02/26/15
So sad the pride catches us up so easily. Love your ending that he found freedom in the never ending grace of the Lord.
02/26/15
Wow, the MC was one proud peacock, wasn't he. Ah, the arrogance of youth. We all had our own source of pride back in day, well, me and you anyway.

Very well done, poet. Thanks for giving us a glimpse into the "Proud" side.

I will look for this in the winner's circle.
03/02/15
Oh I really liked this so much! Beautiful job with the entire piece.

God bless~
03/05/15
Congratulations Robert!

You did really well, I'm so happy for you.

God bless~