The Official Writing Challenge
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Great job! Nice choice of bible story. :)
One correction, You wrote "it the mark" instead of "hit the mark".
Creative retelling of a well known biblical account. Hope you do well in the challenge.
Excellent job with retelling of David's worship and praise in the streets that was despised by his wife.

Well done!

God bless~
When I first begun reading your story I knew it was about David but I felt I was right there in the thoughts of all who were there that day. Your writing is alive vivid and very visual...I pray you will go far in y9ur writing gift to be a blessing to all...
Well done!

God bless~
Congratulations! Pride can be seen in so many ways...some more obvious than others, but always a downfall. I liked reading your article.
Through your writing, I was able to get a better picture of what took place. Good job, and congratulations!