The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story. Almost all offices regardless of the type of industry can go through what your story expresses.

I like how the MC wrestled with thoughts of "tyring to help had she known" -- it showed her great faith and true spirit.

Well done.

God bless~
This is a great story - really engaging from start to finish. I hope it does well in the challenge.
I think this is a fascinating story. I do believe God interacts with us all like that on a regular basis. Nice take on the topic too.
The situation among the characters was a little slow in coming to me but I think I finally got it. Some novels are that way where you are led on until you can see the whole story.

God BLess~